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[Goat]

In the reflecting shadows,
warm breeze pushing forward;
coveting the cut grass. My
heartbeat is quiet, echoes
the bareness of the walls. In
paceable time, a yawn, making
eyes water, but the tension is
unwound. Copper coil loosened.
I want to break out- unstitch
my silhoette and gather the wind
in my arms.

[Ragga_Wh0re]

i like the end part but i still hate you.

die :)

[juice]

i like the ending as well......good stuff :)