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Old Sep 02, 04
13:33
 
Join Date: Nov 2001
djmarkpaul will become famous soon enough
Tidbits

Don't spoil the craving,
here's a sample my good seer.
It may make one go some crazy,
well that's just the beauty here.

Take a little not too much,
sweet imbrace, the faintest touch.
Getting by may need a crutch.
...
Want it all don't let it go,
love it now but here's the show.
Much too little in the flow,
to disrupt the current's woe.

Delicate's this sweet imbrace,
like the smile on your face,
It's what's needed to give chase.
...
Learned a lesson and it's sad,
but now I know I am glad,
as long as I let out tidbits.
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Old Sep 02, 04
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
dapimpstress is an unknown quantity at this point
woot woot bro
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Old Sep 02, 04
kickitliketae-bo
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
the rhyme scheme is horribly redundant.

its spelled embrace.

:)

you seem like a smart guy, you can do better than this.
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Old Sep 04, 04
13:33
 
Join Date: Nov 2001
djmarkpaul will become famous soon enough
^Wow thanks spelling bee, did you ever think that I might like cheesy shit?

Yeah I can do better, but I don't think fnk deserves better. I will share one of my more emotional aggrandized poems for you, I hope you can relate.
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Old Sep 04, 04
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Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
^i anticipate that poem lady guy.
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