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Old Sep 02, 04
Star Trek Girls Are Easy
 
Join Date: Dec 2001
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My Everything/My Nothing.

The Smell of Your Pain.

How willingly,
you come to me
bagging
For me to be
your everything.

I can barely be my own
let alone
be you.
To

how willingly,
you’d give your life
to end your strife.
and I’m
Just the one
with the knife.

Don’t even try
when you stop
to cry
or when you lie.
To me.

don’t even stop
When you fuck it up
just walk away.
From me.



I’m not hear for you.
and I’ll never be
your anything
I don’t know
what to do
for you.
we’re through
are you hearing
My everything?

You’re my nothing.

Last edited by Discord; Sep 02, 04 at 03:52 PM.
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Old Sep 02, 04
EvolveEventManagement
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
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You should submit your written work into a place to get published :)
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Old Sep 02, 04
Mexico April 21st!
 
Join Date: Mar 2004
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yeah thats pretty deep
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Old Sep 02, 04
Star Trek Girls Are Easy
 
Join Date: Dec 2001
Discord is on a distinguished road
:love3:

I'm glad you liked it!

it was sort of a last second mind storm that happened :P

Its not quite done...its actually going to be a song!
i have a tune and everything.


Some parts are going to be "Screamed" and some are going to be sung

i think its going to be pretty neat i hope
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Old Sep 03, 04
kickitliketae-bo
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
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angst
angst
angsty angst

emo goth angsty angst feel my pain
i am so profound with my knife

angst
emo
goth
calanders i am so angsty

i should have kept my legs closed
now i am angst so emo angsty.
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Old Sep 03, 04
Star Trek Girls Are Easy
 
Join Date: Dec 2001
Discord is on a distinguished road
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Originally Posted by ~*goddessa*~
angst
angst
angsty angst

emo goth angsty angst feel my pain
i am so profound with my knife

angst
emo
goth
calanders i am so angsty

i should have kept my legs closed
now i am angst so emo angsty.

Sweetheart, have you even read this shit you try to cause on this board... and you call ME angsty?

*sigh*
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Old Sep 03, 04
bitch please
 
Join Date: Mar 2004
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very nice poem, indeed.
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Old Sep 03, 04
kickitliketae-bo
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
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basically what im trying to say here is


your poem is teh suck...sweetheart.
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Old Sep 03, 04
Star Trek Girls Are Easy
 
Join Date: Dec 2001
Discord is on a distinguished road
Quote:
Originally Posted by ~*goddessa*~
basically what im trying to say here is


your poem is teh suck...sweetheart.
Thanks for you opinion...
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