a day late and a dollar short

Ragga_Wh0re · #1 (**permalink**) Oct 15, 04

they only now are just touching upon what I just let go of.
Pondering when they might realize how absolutely obsolete they have become.
Its funny watching them tho,in all thier glorious grandeur.
I just shake my head and snicker.
What they think is a hot commodity,is something so passe.
And im the only one who grasps this shred of knowledge.
A day late,and dollar short...couldnt be more true.
I bite my tongue as they revel in retrospect.
Idolize idiosyncrazys
Non conformist conformists,aka the medias whore.
Gratification in the elite form.

Goat · #2 (**permalink**) Oct 15, 04

To me, this doesn't say alot, it doesn't go anywhere.
The big words like "grandeur...idiosynchrosies....gratifica tion" don't fit in compared to the rest. it feels like you're trying too hard.
"revel in retrospect" doesn't flow too great off the tongue.
after reading this i don't know what you let go off.
reading this, what you let go of and what "they" (whoever that may be) picked up upon that makes them obsolete, makes you look obsolete.
And the last two lines have no relevance what so ever to the rest.
Not trying to be a dickhead, but i don't think much effort went into this. Better luck next time