Oct 24, 04
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...last one
k its back
i wish the world didnt consist of me what the fuck happened to me looks like mi as concided as can be thinkin bout myself constantly my worthless life and how little it means to me whats this i see? phew the end for me its ocming quickly, phew the end for me makes me so happy, phew the end for me better come quickly, phew the end for me is here finally. Last edited by penguinabc123; Oct 26, 04 at 03:00 PM. 
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Oct 24, 04
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*comes back from midair smashing buildings on the way and throwing cars with families in them at schoolbuses full of children*
RAAWWGGRRRR GRAAAGGGRRR! !!!!! AAAAAWRRRGGGHHHHH RAAAAAAAAAAAWGGG *kicks the jibtek sending him flying out of sight and in one more jump disappears*
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Oct 24, 04
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hmm...
i like the idea behind it i just dont think you should try to force it to rhyme, it makes the rythym a tad jumpy
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Oct 25, 04
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ahh i see, these things are so old lol. i got bored and posted them, but i know what your saying.
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Oct 25, 04
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!!!rhyming Sucks!!
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Oct 25, 04
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point taken, its gone now, sorry.
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Oct 25, 04
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c'mon dude, who gives a fuck what they say, those are just haters...
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Oct 25, 04
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wow, a dumbass said something smart....
WHATS NEXT?
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Oct 25, 04
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i didnt say it sucked
i just said it was jumpy and sounded like a poem your teachers in elementary school made you write and it had to rhyme dont surcome to the peer pressure - having it not there is worse
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Oct 25, 04
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sorry again,
im just really vaunerable right now, so ya i dono what i was doing. grrr..
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Oct 25, 04
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man take this off the boards... talk to me on msn about this shit...
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Oct 26, 04
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youre a fucking baby.
dont post shit if you wont be able to deal with what people might say be it good or bad. thats just common sense. and egor,you piss yourself. nuff said.
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Oct 26, 04
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NOW WHY THE FUCK DID YOU DO THAT??? I didn't get to read your poem, perhaps it sucked, perhaps it was ok. I don't know. But, by deleting your poem and apologizing for it, YOU have become the one who sucks. Don't ever delete your shit, no matter what anyone says about it.
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Oct 26, 04
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k, fine.
i guess i cant win either way. christ, thats what i get.
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Oct 26, 04
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Oct 26, 04
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Oct 27, 04
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shut the fuck up you panty pissing vodkaaaaahhhh drinking roosian. you have all the balls in the world hiding behind your computer screen but when face to face youre an ass kissing pussy.
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