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Nov 06, 04
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Barnacle Survival
Small rock in torrid water
Strong against the sea The wind blows relentless and wet Screaming out your secrets There are no hands to hold Here you are alone Youve faced everything before Why should now be different? Steadfast and grounded Cold and calm Waiting patiently For the storm to break Or begin Isn’t that what life is? Beginnings and endings With no middles Just foreplay and the cigarette after Everything else is hazy The seagulls squawk And you yearn to understand them And wish to be like they are Free and light Blown happily By the cold gale that turns your ears blood red A language everyone speaks Has now become foreign And you want to be everything That comes to them so easily Knowing somehow this isn’t what you waited for The stench of the sea Burning your senses Tart and fishy Heavy yet dull Escaping isn’t a option anymore Trapped in a cage you built yourself But the walls of your foundation is crumbling Cracks emerge But you cant fall Because too many barnacles cling to you for survival Last edited by junglequeen; Nov 06, 04 at 06:35 AM. 
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Nov 06, 04
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Why doesn't anyone else comment much? That's some pretty cool imagery. I won't try to analyze it but this line made me chuckle:
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Nov 06, 04
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yeah i like that chunk too
but thats how i feel people dont comment cuz they feel poetry is too personal either they dont wanna hurt my feeling by telling me it sucks or they dont want people to know they actually took the time to read it
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Nov 06, 04
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yes sea and all the creatures in and about it = the world
its mainly about trying to stay the same when everyone is changing, and then not knowing if its worth holding on to what you have or just throwing it away to fit in
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Nov 07, 04
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sheena i love you to bits and pieces(K)<3
never compromise what you beleive in just to please others. You are a beautiful individual,and please stay that way.I wouldnt change a single thing about you. You need to realize that you are one of a kind,and if people cant learn to accept and appreciate that...erase them from your life. Reading this was so refreshing,I thank you.:) Quote:
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Nov 07, 04
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im always so excited when i see youve commented
hella writer respect strip club soon!?
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Nov 08, 04
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:D FA SHO!!!!! i get paid on the 15th so i think some t&a and booze will be in short order.
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