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Nov 25, 04
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wrote this on acid...
i just found this poem i wrote a while back... it was the first and only time i did acid...it scared the shit out of me..and i just re-read it...for the first time in a year o something..and it kinda freaked me out....NO MORE ACID FOR ERIKA...
his teeth tear into her neck he licks the flish will he suck the soul out of her she is drained of all her blood Satan eats her he rips out her eyes fire strangles her every limb his dagger falls into her desire the devil has found a new midnight obsession 
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Nov 25, 04
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reminds me of the second coming
but it needs either elaboration or some sort of beginning. It just jumps into content without getting the reader ready. Surely some revelation is at hand Surely it's the second coming And the wrath has finally taken form For what is this rough beast Its hour come at last Slouching towards Bethlehem to be born Slouching towards Bethlehem to be born
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Nov 25, 04
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yeah,i dunno i was all fucked up wheni wrote it..
dont really pplan on fixing it or anything..i just found it in a pile of crap in my filing cabinet
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Nov 25, 04
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i dig it
i dont post stuff unless i want help sorry
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Nov 25, 04
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Intense poem, I tryed acid once too way back in the day and here's why I will never touch it again:
Me and my two friends went to the field by Port Moody Junior Secondary and it was a Saturday mid-afternoon and there was some kinda class going on or something anyways I was so high, that I looked at the people from the field and saw them all drowning in water, but there really was no water there just people walking to their cars. I was all like freaking out and telling my friends to save then, but they were all fucked up too. One thought he was a soldier and the other one was trying to reach for the sky or something. It was way too intense, I couldn't even think straight. Acid is way too intense never doing it again, I was stupid and 15 when I tried it, huge misstake. I don't recomand anyone trying it, its a bad drug.
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Nov 25, 04
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i hate acid too...
this was the first and last time i'll ever do it..it wa like a year ago... so i was like 17.. omg..wait..that makes it 2 years ago :( where does time go?? i had a horrible trip, my friends made me watch the movie IT.... now i hate clowns....and its like a rational fear.......acid and clowns DONT MIX
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Nov 25, 04
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i am so doing that some time GO ACID!
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Nov 25, 04
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ballons & clowns.....
thats all i'll say
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Nov 25, 04
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flesh...yeah....
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