carry on

[Ragga_Wh0re]

I love you like there was no yesterday and there`ll never be a tomorrow.

I hold you like its the first time my skin has ever had the honor of gracing yours,

I kiss you like I have virgin lips...quivering,anticipating every lick nibble and suck.

I look at you like Im about to go blind,utilizing my photographic memory so that Ill NEVER forget this sight that is you,so sweet.

I speak like language is going out of style,
I use rash body movements in order to communicate to you exactly what Im feeling
,but really all I need from you is a nod of approval.

Let me carry on,as long as you permit it...and I will.
...oh yes i will.

[wum]

ya gotta move on sistah :)

[Ragga_Wh0re]

what makes you think i havent already?

[junglequeen]

I kiss you like I have virgin lips...quivering,anticipating every lick nibble and suck.

cool line

I dig the format, but i dont find the fifth idea to flow like the rest of them which are short and sweet

I speak like language is going out of style,
I use rash body movements in order to communicate to you exactly what Im feeling
,but really all I need from you is a nod of approval.

(unless the idea is to have them build in length and meaning)

[Ragga_Wh0re]

i find lately that i like to have one last stanza that start off like the rest,but end differently. Kinda like a poetic mash up.

[junglequeen]

i feel that