Feb 10, 05
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urban sprawl.
and we will sit lighting candles on the beach,
creating our own constellations on the fringes of this urban sprawl. and all that would be seen for miles... hundreds of flickering yellow flames with a thousand stories to tell. 
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Feb 10, 05
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shut up infidel.
first of all,writing does NOT have to rhyme. 9 times out of 10 rhyming sucks. I try to avoid rhyming at all costs.Rhymings is for juvenile writers that are just mastering thier craft.I see that youve fallen into the monotony of rhyming quite nicely. Now,you write about a facade you see in popular urban culture. Youve become a walking cliche,emulating everything you know fuck all about,and everything that holds no "purpose". *hands you your ass* now get the fuck out kidd-o.
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Feb 10, 05
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goodflow whyd u delete ur post fuckwad?
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