She...

[CodaDrummer]

Am I stil waiting?
Unable to move / ground into the pavement
She...
She...
She... Said
Fear holds me now / is she here forever
Love and hate at the same time / both being her creation
Two forces / one person / I am being pulled apart / she is still here controlling both sides / she likes two / two seems to be her favourite / whatever she wants with two / one on the shelf / one in her hand / I am on the shelf
high on the shelf / but with no view / only dreams / memories / and a pit stop here and there before she opens her palm again

[Ragga_Wh0re]

instead of using / use ; .

[LeeBrat]

sweet, i like it =)

[mojo]

2 thumbs^

[CodaDrummer]

Originally Posted by ~*goddessa*~

instead of using / use ; .

Uhh, no thanks. You can.

[CodaDrummer]

Thanks for the compliments people! :)

[CodaDrummer]

Originally Posted by ~*goddessa*~

instead of using / use ; .

Punctuation means nothing when you're expressing your feelings in a random fashion.

[CodaDrummer]

Goddessa, don't get me wrong... I appreciate the constructive critiscism.