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Old Feb 10, 05
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Rake

I felt it hit me.


Center of attention? No.

A filter for everything going on around me. If I found something that I didn't like, I changed it... and you didn't even know.


Euphoria? Possibly.


Being aware of this new purification is more like it. This power slips away, and fast. It leaves you with so much to think about. How were you able to handle it? Your heart reminds you of where you have been.


Sleep? No.


A dreamy consciousness. These vivid images are almost too much. Your filter has been removed and everything pours out of you.

Last edited by CodaDrummer; Feb 11, 05 at 07:39 PM.
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Old Feb 10, 05
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chop it up more,use more punctuation,then it will be most excellent my frand.
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Old Feb 10, 05
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wow, i really like that one too=) very talented. and yes^^what she said.
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Old Feb 11, 05
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wow..... thats awsome
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Old Feb 11, 05
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ~*goddessa*~
chop it up more,use more punctuation,then it will be most excellent my frand.
I do agree with chopping it up. It all came to me in one big lump sum, so I thought it fit.
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Old Feb 11, 05
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Ok, so I edited it. After looking at it for a bit, I thought this is the way it should appear.
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Old Feb 11, 05
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wow, thats awsome. =) it deffinatly adds more of an impact they way you re did it...:)
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