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Old Nov 13, 05
sooo fucken ugly
 
Join Date: May 2001
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/Title: For the sake of the forsaken - spoken word

for the sake of the forsaken.
how heavy is the heart?
it is the chest in your chest.
that you just won't unlock.

I looked for love
and I look at it
and I'm so confound
with what I've found

may these real eyes realise
the real lies around us
to find the perfect match,
one that hasn't burnt us.

my broken heart beats
in broken beats
of the surreal sounds
that surrounds us.

I don't want in the end
playing all the angles
loving all the angels
with a big black halo.

in truth, I want love
but I am a fascist,
fasting my emotions
in view of this feast.

so I bear it's weight.
waiting on bottles of beer
to empty, my fears
unresolved it still feels.

liquor is just a
trained home wrecker
train wrecking
the weak for weeks

for the sake of the forsaken
time is the key
it is the key for the cure
that you just can't find

- Written by me, a little old. one of the first spoken word pieces I tried writing. More about play on words then actually rhyming.
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Old Nov 13, 05
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Join Date: Nov 2002
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i can relate, so i like.

well written man.
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Old Nov 13, 05
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Join Date: Oct 2002
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i really liked the play on words,but its a lil too dark and depressing for me.
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Old Nov 13, 05
~*~Contrary~*~
 
Join Date: Oct 2003
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this is awesome, i absolutely love it. the play on words twists your mind into different areas with amazing skillfullness.
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