Is this stupid thread working?

[Genotype]

this is only a test.

[Genotype]

its hard sometimes, gotta try.
seconds turn to hours and the days fly bye.
wheres the time goes, when we're starin out the window?
the lost moments of our lives, stay strong strive.
all things come to an end, and we all ask why, when we struggle to survive.
its good to be alive, stay strong and strive for happiness.
she grew up in a hellish underground, skippin all her classes, smoking downtown, never graduated, always actin the clown, caught hiV sharin neadles shootin down, with one place to go at the bottom of a well, saw a little bit of heaven and a whole lotta hell, here to tell.
Im back on my feet, takin back all the things that bad habits took from me.
Im straight out clean if you know what I meen.
I hope my worst enemy dont see what Ive seen.
Its the little things in life that make it a big test.
you gotta do you best, strive for happiness.
happiness is bliss, and its the name of the mutha fucking game homeboy.

[fable]

if the content of this piece is relevent in your life, then i feel where your coming from, all too well.

the last line is awkward, and doesnt match with the dialect of the rest, although this could be a cool element if you ditched the "mutha fucking game homeboy" it somewhat contrived and far too played out.

"the lost moments of our lives, stay strong strive.
all things come to an end, and we all ask why, when we struggle to survive.
its good to be alive, stay strong and strive for happiness."
TIGHT! But you use strive twice within close phrases, and you use happyness far too often. Perhaps replacing "stay strong and strive for happyness" with "better days will arrive, if i stay sound" -- you still gotta word ending in "..ive" and "sound" works with "underground" in the next sentence.

Over all, im diggn it, thx for throwing down some of your words. :)