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Old Jan 08, 06
.whisper in my ear.
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
icey is an unknown quantity at this point
will i.

listening to the rain slowly pitter-pattering at the window
i look only at your fingers entwined with mine
and then i let my eyes close once more.
deep breath.
and another.
your chest rises and falls beside me
i cant see it happen but I know it does.
its that kind of fleeting knowing.
you will breathe.
but will i know it because i am beside you,
or just because i know you are alive?
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Old Jan 09, 06
tellin it like it is
 
Join Date: Feb 2005
ja_raul is an unknown quantity at this point
i like it, ill reply with a more detailed critique later
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