New tune "Jon-E industry - Proximity"..

[Jon-E industry]

Still needs some drum work but im looking for feedback! good or bad..

check it out at www.soundclick.com/djjoneindustry

heavy tune. You should put your drums through some distortion to match the heavy feel of the tune

PS:

Is that the "Notchpad" preset on the albino ?? I love that sound

pps: check out the vanguard vst.. lots of good "trance and bass" presets

[Jon-E industry]

thanx for the tip! :) ill definatly check it out

[shift]

presets?!?

[C_squared]

sounds like 32 bit nintendo music... at least you finished it.

[Jon-E industry]

Originally Posted by C_squared

sounds like 32 bit nintendo music... at least you finished it.

Can u elaborate? any suggestions that would help would be apreciated

[C_squared]

Originally Posted by Jon-E industry

Can u elaborate? any suggestions that would help would be apreciated

Ummm I thought that was a pretty good description. But if I must elaborate, it sounds like video game music, under produced, non-refined... Shift also noticed you were using presets from whatever software you're using. Try using filters on all your instruments to make everything a little bit more you're own.

Oh and where's the bass?

[Jon-E industry]

Originally Posted by C_squared

Try using filters on all your instruments to make everything a little bit more you're own.

Oh and where's the bass?

This is what I was looking for.. Im still learning. any suggestions on how to make my bass sounds thicker?

Layer it with a low frequency sub. Be sure to highpass your other bass to make room frequency-wise. Add a few more midrange layers, and send everything to a group channel. Compress it or put it through Antares Tube with some distortion. Maybe add some flange/chorus to the hi/midrange

[Jon-E industry]

Originally Posted by Junglist

Layer it with a low frequency sub. Be sure to highpass your other bass to make room frequency-wise. Add a few more midrange layers, and send everything to a group channel. Compress it or put it through Antares Tube with some distortion. Maybe add some flange/chorus to the hi/midrange

Thanx.. ill give it a try

[Liquid mason]

Jon-E try the forums on www.seattlednb.com they are much more helpful there.