Where Do We Go From Here

[Goat]

started writing on the bus today. turning it into a song. any criticism or feed back would be appreciated. thanx :)



this feeling has changed from one thing to another
just like the brother beside me
to the left and the right an emotional cover
up all the hardship it's no where now can't you see
that the nothing has changed despite all these killings
of the words left inside transformed into feelings
opening up to a tide of emotional rampage
that only continues to set the stage as spoken
voices come to an age where nothing is safe
to speak or to write all they do is chafe
at the thoughts left unspoken in the soul
left token in the dark stepping up to the plate only to find
it's already been broken

where do we go from here

[agent.starling]

this feeling has changed from one thing to another
just like the brother beside me
to the left and the right an emotional cover
up all the hardship it's no where now can't you see
that the nothing has changed despite all these killings
of the words left inside transformed into feelings
opening up to a tide of emotional rampage
that only continues to set the stage as spoken
voices come to an age where nothing is safe
to speak or to write all they do is chafe
at the thoughts left unspoken in the soul
left token in the dark stepping up to the plate only to find
it's already been broken

broken yet stepped on depite the damage existing,
i ponder faint path ways,
yet one looks for certian, almost insisting
begging and pushing my mind into clouds of haze
i stop in my trackings to look through the daze
and find nothing staring back
my unsuccessful searching proves a pessimist proud
trekking on in my travels of distance unfound
im unravelled in envy of nothing but waste
the faint seems to focus on that one dreamy place
i step throught the path way to begin a tiresome race
my life.

[tufflove]

hey goat ur hawt!!!!!
i just got home frum oh funky i can barley see, i got sukker punched 2wice in the face by a boy .........at the party!!!!!!!!!
but yea' ne way, tonite u lo0ked damn sexy!!!!!!!!

[Courtney]

yea, he did

WHO THE FUK PUNCHED U?!#@!%!#%$^$^

[Magi]

Originally posted by ~ASH3~
i got sukker punched 2wice in the face by a boy .........at the party!!!!!!!!!

WHAT?


Who would/could do such a thing?

[Goat]

wrong thread. but thx.

ya. heard about it. not gravy :n:

[ballerinabooty]

i would have to say i feel what you write! cuz i can picture amd tend to understnad what you were feeling when u wrote this . i have no criticism. but i do have complements :) cuz i think its great ... i do some writing myself but it tends to go every where and not make much sence .
- Julieann