New breakbeat track - looking for feedback plz

[firestar]

Broken beat heads, please have a listen, this is my newest breaks project. I have tried to get some feedback in the 'personal promo' section, but obviously people don't visit that section very much. Anyways, It has a very "Deekline" feel to it as deekline is one of my fav producers to date.

The track is called "Bumbaclaat" and had a very booty/tech sound, complete w/sitar samples and elephant man vocals.

A couple of questions, one, would you buy this record? And two , if no, what does it need to make it a sure sale. I think it's personally a heavy track with an enormous b-line, and a catchy hook. What do you think? Please be kind as this is just a rough draft.

Click here to download!

AND, if you like this one, click here to download more d&b, breaks and hiphop tracks I've done.

Cheers,
Andrew

[soma]

catchy tune, and your bassline has a nice groove. Try to maintain some more consitancy with the bassline through out the tune so it dosen't clash with with the sitars.

nice work though!

I'd like to hear the finished copy

[sh4un]

the bass is slick, wat u use for it?

the kick drum seems 2 really stand out in the track tho
i guess it mite suppose 2 be like that but it bugs me for some reason.

nice work tho for sure!

[firestar]

Originally Posted by sh4un

the bass is slick, wat u use for it?

the kick drum seems 2 really stand out in the track tho
i guess it mite suppose 2 be like that but it bugs me for some reason.

nice work tho for sure!

Soma: Yeah its tough to get the harmonics right with the sitar as it has a flat sound and hard to match pitches.

Sh4un: Thats kind of the booty bass part with the prominant kick. The idea was to have the booty beat, but the nu-skoolish bass (The same style deekline uses) I'll try turning down the kick and see how it sounds.

Cheers for the feedback mates! Every little bit helps!

[Code]

Sounds good, I'd dance to it. When the Sitars are playing I'd keep the bass doing it's low sequence- don't do the higher note sequence (I think that's what Soma meant too- Im not sure)

I personaly like the Kick out there for that style

"Bumbaclaat!" watch the floaty too much Delay panned L-R effect. Maybe shorten the length on the delay- JMO. It kinda tumbles and rolls too much for my taste.

I hope you post the final version, cause it's a nice track.

[firestar]

Originally Posted by Code

Sounds good, I'd dance to it. When the Sitars are playing I'd keep the bass doing it's low sequence- don't do the higher note sequence (I think that's what Soma meant too- Im not sure)

I personaly like the Kick out there for that style

"Bumbaclaat!" watch the floaty too much Delay panned L-R effect. Maybe shorten the length on the delay- JMO. It kinda tumbles and rolls too much for my taste.

I hope you post the final version, cause it's a nice track.

Yeah there is one part in the where I think its a bit floaty too, i'm looking to do something about that! Cheers for the feedback.

Anyone else?

[firestar]

*sob* - bump?

[LeeBrat]

Originally Posted by Code

I hope you post the final version, cause it's a nice track.

i agree :) i like it