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  #26 (permalink)  
Old Feb 03, 04
JUNGALITHP MAATHIV
 
Join Date: Jun 2001
Rytalin is an unknown quantity at this point
Constructive critisizm is good though.
And you can usually derive some sorta constructiveness from almost any critisism that's more than just bitching about spelling :)
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  #27 (permalink)  
Old Feb 03, 04
prangin' out
 
Join Date: May 2001
zarlon will become famous soon enoughzarlon will become famous soon enough
yeah helen, perogies are the shit and so is smash brothers.

keep on writing, it takes time to get places
so i find at least
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Old Feb 03, 04
punch me please
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
donkey punch is an unknown quantity at this point
public school system perhaps?
i had trouble deriving meaning
i had no idea what you were getting at

im not saying you should stop - im just saying the jumping about subject wise and up and down capitalization takes away instead of adds to the over all comprehension of the poem
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  #29 (permalink)  
Old Feb 03, 04
Make 7 Up YOURS
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
hellzbellz is an unknown quantity at this point
just my thouts about this post bored and raves


plaza of all nations
ready for the date
when this girl is ready to date
all warm and fuzy inside
needs to find that ride

people of all cultures being to sway
what is it that makes us become this way?!
love or confusement about drugs?


as i stand in line to get inside
all i can think about is those guys
everywhere they stand
and the first one i see takes my hand


leads me to xtc and all type of drugs
whats that meaning are you giveing me a hug? :soak:
hugs are up
hugs can be down
some time you hug the wrong clown
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  #30 (permalink)  
Old Feb 03, 04
Make 7 Up YOURS
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
hellzbellz is an unknown quantity at this point
i know this all might not make sence
but sometimes its the best of us
that do this stuff....

some friends come and go
now i need to let go
no suicide here
i'm just going to HAVE a FUCKIN BEER

why does this make sence
maybe cuz i realized
i can make the best
life so unsure

go away u big baby :toasted:
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  #31 (permalink)  
Old Feb 03, 04
Registered
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
Nyame is an unknown quantity at this point
I just think you are full of yourself. If no one else likes your poetry then how can it be the best.
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  #32 (permalink)  
Old Feb 04, 04
Make 7 Up YOURS
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
hellzbellz is an unknown quantity at this point
its only the best when u say STOP :trippin:
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  #33 (permalink)  
Old Feb 04, 04
Registered
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
Nyame is an unknown quantity at this point
Well then I will never say that word
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  #34 (permalink)  
Old Feb 04, 04
Make 7 Up YOURS
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
hellzbellz is an unknown quantity at this point
i had to when i over did it,... but was held tight.....

someone special and nice
tooken care of?
hrmm
big proplems and
letting the sence go :soak:
music is my key to the soul
and
helped me flow
now i dance non stop like never before

and i wonder if i was the whore?
whats this pain in my tummy?
i felt sooooooo stubby
stub the toe
call me a hoe?
i and no fix
i like to blix :smoke1:
i try so hard to fit in
no one seems to no


what went on here
i went postal.
my lights on and on
maybe i need to wazz
on


ravers in my heart
this is my new star
blue star shineing ever so bright
when i was held ever so tight

tight was the key
when u had to go pee

this is what its all about
when you feel like your in that
crowd

fnk is the best
somethings i just got off my chest! :smoke1: :smoke1:
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  #35 (permalink)  
Old Feb 04, 04
nope.
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
robyn is a jewel in the roughrobyn is a jewel in the roughrobyn is a jewel in the roughrobyn is a jewel in the rough
Just because it has a lot of line breaks and doesn't make sense, doesn't mean it's poetry.
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  #36 (permalink)  
Old Feb 04, 04
Make 7 Up YOURS
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
hellzbellz is an unknown quantity at this point
i wrote that in under 10 mins :c-tard:

wow!
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  #37 (permalink)  
Old Feb 05, 04
*self promo*
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
tufflove is an unknown quantity at this point
soundz like spoken word
can u play tha gee taur?
i can get u giggs
if u learn to be good n shitt
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  #38 (permalink)  
Old Feb 05, 04
Make 7 Up YOURS
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
hellzbellz is an unknown quantity at this point
YOU KNOW WHAT ASH THANKS!!!!!


but i think i can mange on own!!! :c-tard: :p :moon:
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  #39 (permalink)  
Old Feb 05, 04
Make 7 Up YOURS
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
hellzbellz is an unknown quantity at this point
LINKIN PARK OWNS

i woke up in a dream today,
to the cold and the statik
put my cold feet on the floor
pretending to be who i'm not anymore
even though your so close to me i cant bring you back


the sound of your voice
even if your not with me

i'm with you
even when i close my eyes
fine line between this and that

i'm traped
even thought your so close to me i cant bring you back
the sound of your voice
painted in my memories
you now i see
keeping everything inside

even when i close my eyes!!! :trippin:


no matter how far weve come
i cant wait to see tomorrrow
with you


this is a linkin park song but i mixed it up....
dont get the wrong ideas guys!!!! :smoke1:
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Old Feb 05, 04
Make 7 Up YOURS
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
hellzbellz is an unknown quantity at this point
my two fav songs right now with you and ^ that one


sun shine galour


open those eyes
see what the day has become
i put my foot on that sour ground
sick of oweing you nothing
i hate when u dont understand


place for my head?
all the people i thought i knew
and ohhhh shit i took that wiff
tiff
i hate when u say u dont understand
place for my head


YOU try to take the best of me
GOAWAY
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
come back




we all miss the free land of the hole
that is surrey i belive

plcae for my head :kam:
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  #41 (permalink)  
Old Feb 05, 04
Make 7 Up YOURS
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
hellzbellz is an unknown quantity at this point
i cant belive we had it would last
she was from your past
one day i was having your kids


so right when it was wrong?
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