october

[Ragga_Wh0re]

spread my legs and closed my heart,You hushed my crying with kisses.Skin crawling when we`d lay in bed,heart and mind racing while Im pacing schemes in my thoughts.Maybe it was the spark of life in my womb that kept me from sleep that night,wondering if things would be different if I had just spent the night.Lay in bed beside you eyes wide open,listening to the water trickle down your God forsaken table top Zen waterfall.I remember the car ride home,the occasional melo dramatic yawn would break the deafening silence for only a few seconds.Every day I play out that night in my head.Wondering if I had stayed,things would have turned out different.Instead it woulda been me laying up in your bed,swollen belly,heart and soul well fed.But instead you chose to starve me of what I deserved,and then i realized it shoulda never been you.I still wish it wasnt.Unfortunate that it is,having to look at your face day in and day out reminding me of the heart ache and lonely nights.And I rise to the occasion again and again,victimize me when you kiss her.And this is how the rest of my life will play out,constantly reminded of how it should have been but will never be.How I grew a part of you in me,and how you refused to see the beauty.

[LLaaUUrrYYn]

This is straight out of a "WEAR CONDOMS" commercial.

Deep.

[ebbomega]

Yeah, I really hope your kid reads this at age 10 and is traumatized for life.

[Ragga_Wh0re]

at age 10,yes something like this would most definately be traumatizing.At age 13 or 14,not so much.

and lauryn,with each sentance you contradict yourself more and more.Dont negate the sentiment behind the poem because its better by a long shot compared to others tripe.

and what happened to you being a negative bitch and then supposedly growing up?

hypocrite.

but maybe this would be better received if included his first,middle,and last name.Where he was born,when he was born,where he works,where he went to school,what his parents names are,where they were born when they were born. etc.

[LLaaUUrrYYn]

Actually..I was not being hypocritical at all..nor did I say anything negative.

It definately makes me want to use protection when sleeping men I would prefer not to father my children....that doesnt make it a bad poem..AND I SAID IT WAS "DEEP"

Such hostility!

Originally Posted by Ragga_Wh0re

at age 10,yes something like this would most definately be traumatizing.At age 13 or 14,not so much.

and lauryn,with each sentance you contradict yourself more and more.Dont negate the sentiment behind the poem because its better by a long shot compared to others tripe.

and what happened to you being a negative bitch and then supposedly growing up?

hypocrite.

but maybe this would be better received if included his first,middle,and last name.Where he was born,when he was born,where he works,where he went to school,what his parents names are,where they were born when they were born. etc.

[Ragga_Wh0re]

for some wierd reason i doubt your sincerity.

[LLaaUUrrYYn]

Originally Posted by Ragga_Wh0re

for some wierd reason i doubt your sincerity.

Dont doubt it.

Unlike you, I am not a bitch 100%

=)