May 25, 02
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i am a poet
here are some of my poems:
(titles in bold) you dirty fucking bastard hey you ya you you are a dirty fucking bastard eat shit idiot i fell down the stairs and my shoes fell off ka-thump pow yowzas, that hurt i think i fell where are my shoes oh they fell off your mother is a slut your mother is a slut hahah hehahhah jerk. -- thats all i have right now, but im hoping to get published some time soon and make a book of my poems to help motivate people to say what is really on their mind ok 
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May 25, 02
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well you did use some onomatopoeia in the second one... props to you, i don't like people that don't make sounds in their poems...
the first one is dope but i'm confused about the third one. what kind of structure are you using for that? i don't believe i'm familiar with that *runs off to harvard*
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