Oct 20, 02
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Butterfly
Crying down a waterfall
I splash down my sorrow Hitting the cold harsh water fast Soaking it into my skin I sink while it overwhelms me To a point I cannot control Just as i cant take it anymore It captivates my soul Lost among the rippling tides I struggle to find out And float onto the water crest Leaving my problems behind Dreams of sun and warmth, Stars that shine real bright Keep my mind at rest On those restless lonely nights Feelings of utter helplessness Wash over me with each wave As i'm carried off further Into the distance far away Thinking my life is over I start to loose all hope Of ever leaving this water I become unable to cope Things growing dark I begin to fade away And glide into the darkness Leaving my body behind Watching myself down below Departing from that sea I float to a far away place Of peaceful tranquility Landing in a place like heaven A soothing wind fills the air Holding my body warm and close Showing me it cares Standing still and silent This calm and gentle breeze Filling the air around me Sets my mind at ease At this very moment For an eternity of all time It is here that I see you An angel in the sky I hold my arms out to you Trying not to cry For I miss you so much My Angelic Butterfly 
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Oct 21, 02
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that is so beautiful my eyes r filled with tears
wow awesome imagery
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Oct 21, 02
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:kimmie:
Thank you so much!! I wrote that a while ago but its one of my better poems, so i like sharing it :) I was reading some of your submissions, they are really good. How long you've been writing for?
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Oct 21, 02
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Ive been writing since i was about 8yrs young
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Oct 21, 02
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whoa same here...i still have the very first thing i wrote way back when too...its reallly really bad but fun to look back on. plus i was only wittle.
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Oct 21, 02
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I have the first poem i wrote its cute
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Oct 25, 02
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wow...thats amazing....u got some talent
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Oct 26, 02
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thank you so bunches of muches!!!
Hopefully one of these days ill get published and people will like me, or hate either way i could say ..yeah well im publish so there.
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