Nov 06, 02
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Maddening rage
turn the page infectious scorn days of yorn sport me bloodied&bruised Hate to be reused tears abused Smile for me I bleed for you Not to be reckoned Yet they beckoned Soft spoken words Elegance Grace Everything lies No repreive Backlashes and reprocussions Life... films great production Bitterness unknown Tap 3 times home Swoon squeal My ideal is real Plauge me within Intangible feelings Festering wounds No healing Lovely leper Banish me to death Vile emotion Memory repressed 
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Nov 07, 02
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I really like this one
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Nov 07, 02
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the title is a riddle... figure it out
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Nov 10, 02
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C`MON IM WAITING FOR U MONKEYS TO FIGURE IT OUT! ITS PLAIN AS DAY!!!! c`mon guys I had a lil more faith in yah...
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Nov 10, 02
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how many guys you've slept with?
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Nov 10, 02
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no but the numerical part is correct ... ur half way there think kiddy think! ill give u a candy
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Nov 10, 02
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by the looks of it sweetie...you have no more candy to give. you've eaten it all.
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Nov 11, 02
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and by the looks of u havent the audacity t post ur own pic... shush and apparently all u can spew at me is verbal diahreah since u cannot figure out the fuckin riddle to this poem buncha morons the lot of ya. Jesus some people should be steralized
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Nov 11, 02
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the audacity? hah...you might wanna stop using big words before you choke on them...look the word up in the dictionary.
and i have posted my pics actually?so i don't know what you're talking about. then again...i don't think anyone does.
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Nov 11, 02
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yes i know what that supposed big word audacity means fuck face shut ur trap and sorry its not like I make a job 2 read ur threads...unlike u...
i am a cat hisss u r a stupid dumb fuckin kid that doesnt know when to quit
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Nov 11, 02
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no sweetie...we've been through this before...you're not a cat, you're more of a pig. are you as dense as you look? i mean your head looks fat but it THAT fat? jeez louise.
reading my threads has nothing to do with your poor diction skills. nice try at getting out of that one, silly! don't tell me to shut my trap. it hurts my heart when you do that. ouch. but in all seriousness now...i'll shut my trap when i'm good and ready, aiiiiiiight? but for now, scamper off. i'm done with you for today. come back tomorrow though please...you're entertaining. -s
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Nov 11, 02
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the whole making it a job 2 read ur threads is having to do with ur pictures being posted. And yah u do make it a job 2 read my threads stronzo! and there u go with ur gradschool tactics again its getting rather old and the only one who they r amusing is u and ur feeble minded posse. U have bubble gum humour...ex:u buy a piece of 5 cent gum and u get those weak ass comics wrapped up in them...bubble gum humour.
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Nov 11, 02
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Quote:
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Nov 11, 02
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I have to explain them all because u people r morons i swear to fuck the majority of u all are mentally deficient minus a select few.
so now do u understand? AND GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY POST IF U HAVE NOTHING TO SAY OF MY POETRY AND ALL UR GONNA SPEW IS BULLSHIT DO IT IN THE FUCKIN TOILET BOWL UNDER MY POST "YO CHINGO PERROS" DO U UNDERSTAND?
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Nov 11, 02
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And furthermore the whole grade shool tactics line is ever so fitting of u imbisiles so i will continure to use it. If u do not want to see these lines re-used over and over again then simply DONT READ MY FUCKING POSTS ITS THAT FUCKING EASY U FUCKIN MORON!!!!!!! u have a brain use it?
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Nov 11, 02
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why thank you jenna.
you're absolutely right, godessa...this thread is about your poetry. so lets talk about it.... straight up...i personally hate it. it has no real underlying subject...just a mish-mash of words composed to look all intellectual when, in reality...how should i put this...hmmm...it's shit.
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Nov 11, 02
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now thats more like it twiggy! U get a Gold star for ur excellent effort wow u have amazed me! definate a for effort *smile*
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Nov 11, 02
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straight up...i personally hate it. it has no real underlying subject...just a mish-mash of words composed to look all intellectual when, in reality...how should i put this...hmmm...it's shit. [/b][/quote]
yes there is a real underlying subject and u obviously cannot see the underlying subject.... now getting back to the feeble minded morons thing i said ... HOT DANG IT RANG TRUE AGAIN!!!! omg like who would have thunk like oh my godddddd!!!!  :hehe: :moon: :kam: :finger:
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Nov 11, 02
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Nov 11, 02
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see i told u kiddies it wasnt that hard!
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Nov 11, 02
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It sounds as if you're trying too hard to make it all rhyme together... poetry does not have to rhyme to sound good, infact, most poetry that I find beautiful is abstract and not just a bunch of rhyming words mashed together without much thought.
Of course, that is just my preferance for poetry.
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Nov 11, 02
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I like rhyme schemes
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