I dunno why butI like this poem =)

[Bitchin]

In the Well

By Andrew Hudgins

My father cinched the rope,
a noose around my waist,
and lowered me into
the darkness. I could taste

my fear. It tasted first
of dark, then earth, then rot.
I swung and struck my head
and at that moment got

another then: then blood,
which spiked my mouth with iron.
Hand over hand, my father
dropped me from then to then:

then water. Then wet fur,
which I hugged to my chest.
I shouted. Daddy hauled
the wet rope. I gagged, and pressed

my neighbor's missing dog
against me. I held its death
and rose up to my father.
Then light. Then hands. Then breath.

[munky_no_fun]

that is good, hmm i think i might check to see more by him...
thanx fer sharing!

[Bitchin]

actually I found it on this..
http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/p180-list.html
theres actully a few good ones on there!

[cinist]

its disturbing

[Bitchin]

^if you think thats disturbing.. you should see some of the shit I write.. heck.. I'll go find one for you.. oi

ahaa.. oh dear

[justa~gurl]

po9st some of your stuff jovi i'd like to read it.. or pm me or soemthing


i lkike it though....kinda reminds me of "the ring"

[cinist]

find us one ji~net:)