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Old Mar 29, 03
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New art y'izzall

[They're massive, sorry!]









All these are copyright ME... =)

Well hope you enjoyed, keep in mind they're just sketches, me having fun.. :) Perhaps I'll put out a few cg's of them sometime later, I'm still getting familiar with muscle structure/characters [as you can tell 'cause I haven't really done anything too developed yet..]
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Old Mar 29, 03
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^hey
just wanted to say that u have a crazy style....i like.
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Old Mar 29, 03
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those sketches are dope, how many hours you put into them?
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Old Mar 29, 03
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Hours? Errr I spent 10ish minutes on each of those drawings...

'Tis why they could be much much better!
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Old Mar 29, 03
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But hey thanks guys! Any criticism tho?
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Old Mar 29, 03
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i dont critisize(sp) art that often, because it's however you want to interperate your imagination :) you should try cleaning up some of the guide lines and adding some color, thatd be sick
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Old Mar 31, 03
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I don't think you can criticise a preliminary sketch.??
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Old Mar 31, 03
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claire those are soo ill
draw one of mee!
like tha' ol' ghetto b yellow days! :keebler:
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Old Apr 01, 03
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i like the last one the best...

i love the squiggles!
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Old Apr 01, 03
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If you're going to fix em up, one thing I noticed. The girl in the second picture.. One boob looks waaaay larger then the other. Maybe I'm missing the line? But it's look disporportioned..

Otherwise they're neat, it's a dif style. I like =) (and good for like 10 minute each! haha if i ever tried to do that I'd get stick men.. :P)
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Old Apr 01, 03
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u got skills kid :keebler:
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Old Apr 01, 03
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i like the irratic line strokes you use, claire. it makes the sketches so much more exciting and dynamic! i love your style!

-s.
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Old Apr 03, 03
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I think you just have an obsession with BREASTS Cheryl..
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Old Apr 03, 03
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^^ So what if i do? Huh? Is that a problem?? :P
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Old Apr 03, 03
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Hey Cheryl it's not that her boobs are mis-shapen it's that I was -trying- to draw the folds of the shirt and the way it hangs..

Oh well that's what happens with quick sketches! :)
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Old Apr 03, 03
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cool! i used to draw like u.. anime face with big eyes and big baggy pants.. i think if u clean those up and colour it or sumthin it'll look dope..
peace
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Old Apr 03, 03
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good shit
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Old Apr 03, 03
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pretty chill, the only constructive criticism i have is that they stress lines in your figures with action don't really seem apparent, and your shading could use a little work. The amount of shading you have done in some places makes the figure look a litte clutterd and doesn't really add to the realism of say folds in clothing, facial expression, etc.

hope that helped...i really dont know shit about art though
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Old Apr 03, 03
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Ahh, okie that makes sense.

They are still good for quick sketches though.. I like =) Mismastches boobs or not..hehe :P
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Old Apr 03, 03
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Edit: Quick, sketchy, sketches...

Yeah, Note that they aren't really finished :) I guess I should scan in some of my newer stuff but it's so much efforrrttt...
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Old Apr 09, 03
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DRAW MEE!!!!!
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Old Apr 10, 03
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oh my god~y cant ppl just look n appreciate~everyone has to be a fuckin critic~everynone needs to judge. blah
analyze this :moon:

maybe thats why its hard for me to take compliments but really..thats the way I think and all u analysers make me sick
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Old Apr 11, 03
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Nice, i like them.

You should learn to paint those for sure.
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Old Apr 11, 03
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Quote:
Originally posted by messejesse
oh my god~y cant ppl just look n appreciate~everyone has to be a fuckin critic~everynone needs to judge. blah
analyze this :moon:

maybe thats why its hard for me to take compliments but really..thats the way I think and all u analysers make me sick
Quote:
Originally posted by zarlon
But hey thanks guys! Any criticism tho?

learn to read, please.
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