Black Widow

[Lush]

She seductively licks her poison lips and sets her icy gaze upon her next prey;
Her transparent bedroom eyes manipulate his soul and instantly he falls under her spell.
Nonchalantly laughing at his empty words, she slowly strokes his ego until the time comes to feed.
Mysterious and charming, her luscious presence captures the room: long dark hair and cherry red nails that shimmer like drops of blood against her fair skin.
Years of pain and sorrow caged up and never shown: her pride flourishes and now drives her hunger for revenge.
She graces the dance floor as she lures him to the bar and orders a drink.
Gracefully twirling her martini glass and casting him in a state of hypnosis, he is subconciously wrapped in her web of desire.
Unaware of his poisoned fate, he deliriously allows himself to embrace in her kiss of death.

[Goat]

Shindiggy. Very.
Dark. Foreboding. Sets the imagination off. great metaphores.
This is great Shadi.
write on.

[yoko*]

I like the words you use. they're all passionate, seductive and sexy throughout. Full of desire and kind of has this s&m like theme going on.

hot.

[cheebus420]

this made me fart and puke at the same time, pure disgusting filth


in other words I liked it.

[Lush]

^ I don't know whether I should be flattered or disguisted.

Thanks Max and Yoko :)