promise

[Ragga_Wh0re]

if you dont fall away from me Ill push you down I swear.
Dont give me the right answers to my wrong questions when its too late to turn back.
Dont sit there and look at me,cuz when you do it feels almost as if youre touching me;
even though your hands are bound.

IF YOU DONT FALL AWAY FROM ME ILL PUSH YOU DOWN I SWEAR!
BUt you and I both know,the former will never happen cuz youve pushed me so far down im slowly starting to fall away.
You watch and admire me disintergrate,kinda like ash dancing off flames.
And ill fall into the earth and be at peace.

[Sniper]

Awsome poem

[LeeBrat]

very good work indeed...you always have very nice stuff:)

[Ragga_Wh0re]

thanx.
i think it needs some fine tuning cuz i wrote it right when i woke up so yah.

[LeeBrat]

Originally Posted by ~*goddessa*~

You watch and admire me disintergrate,kinda like ash dancing off flames.

i really like the use of immagery here

[*Kane]

wow , that remind's me of exactly how i feel about this chick, nice poem :y: