be her you

[bob]

does that make any sense...?

i was just writing a bunch of crap, and that came out... i tried to explain it to myself, but wasn't satisfied with my definition...

i guess i was just trying to say that if u wanna win a girl's heart, u gotta be the "you" that she likes, that she fell for.

but i just don't like how that is said. can someone do any better?


this is what i wrote down to begin with...

be her you.
be her me?
be the you who she likes
you will be hers, and that's good
if you want to give her your all
you must start with you yourself.

will you be mine?
will i be yours?


maybe this is just me frustrating over being the right guy for a girl...
like that will ever happen. hah.

[Cowboy]

it sounds pretty cool...like a third person telling it to YOU....about what he sees that she wants...in a way....i guess...but i get it....pretty much jus saying be the person that she was initially interested in or whatever....be yourself....not what u try to be when u know she's interested....cuz she wasn't interested in "him"...but "you".......

right?

corrie