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Old Jan 09, 04
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Join Date: Oct 2002
Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
solo sound

you jumped on the bed
pinned me down,
wrapped ur arms around me
and held me for hours.

i wish i could stay in that moment forever
let go?
never.
how perfectly content i was,
just to feel your hot skin on mine,
how perfectly content i was,
to hear your heart beat...
as it slowly lulled me to sleep.

how unbeleivably happy i was to awake to your beautiful blue eyes,
messy bed head,
and silly smile.

Now miles separate us,
its only been days since ive seen you
minutes since ive heard your voice,
and i ache.
I ache for those eyes,
your lips
that smile,
your skin...
the way your arms trapped me,
kept me safe.
happy.

The solo sound of my heart beat lulls me to sleep,
i hope my ears deceive me and i hear yours as well,
another night without your melody
is another night of hell.
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Old Jan 09, 04
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Join Date: Mar 2003
Goat has a spectacular aura aboutGoat has a spectacular aura about
this, i actually like.

well done!
i've the strangest feeling i've read this somewhere before :soak:
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Old Jan 09, 04
kickitliketae-bo
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
^well i s`pose poems that clearly point things out are easier for you to comprehend.

i posted this poem on clubvibes when i wrote it about 3 days ago or so..perhaps youve seen it there.

and if thats not what u meant and u are implying i have plaguarized(sp) someone you are sadly mistaken cuz i rarely read other poets work.
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Old Jan 09, 04
FK Slob
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Pho Bich Nga is an unknown quantity at this point
props again godessa :keebler:
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Old Jan 10, 04
kickitliketae-bo
 
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Ragga_Wh0re will become famous soon enoughRagga_Wh0re will become famous soon enough
thanx again pho bich nga!!!! :toasted:
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