Poetry!

[gratia]

does anyone write peotry???? if you do, please share. and one day when i am not so lazy i will post as well......maybe tomorrow. but for now i want to read all of your brilliant creations!!!!! so do it! ;)

[Chewy]

cannons to the left
cannons to the right
glorious thunder

[-evil-duerr-]

i sure do!

i write poetry, and all sorts of other stuff thats top secret.....
..but that shits for sale not for share!..../ hehehe !

[Ragga_Wh0re]

nobody writes on fnk,or they do they just dont post it because a)its crap or b)too personal.

come on you fucking pansys post your shit :|

[Asheai]

Well... I write a lot of poetry, however most would be either too long to post, too personal (as goddess said) or not very well written... I dunno, here's one that I personally like:

Lost Without You:

The imprint of your body lies still in our bed,
though your smell only lingers faintly,
teasingly playing with my hungry senses.
The ruffled black sheets are undying testament
to the fact that you were truly once here beside me -
not a figment of an over-actice imagination,
bringing sweet fantasys to haunting reality.
The empty silk scarfs tied so delicately to the bedposts
bring back blissful memories of tempstous play
and cause a fleeting smile to stain my lips
before the emptiness strikes a lonely chord in my heart
and leaves jewels of tears glimmering in my broken eyes.

... I'm only posting this shit 'cuz I don't like being called a pansy! So be nice, even if it sucks... :)

[gratia]

^^^^ glad to see someone has some balls ;) lol
that was good..i like the last two lines....very gripping. i can relate.

[Asheai]

Thanks :) I post on www.darkpoetry.com, but there I know everyone is interested in the same kind of writing as me. Here it's a lot harder... But someone had to get the ball rolling... I'm also interested in what everyone else on fnk has to offer... There's gotta be some creative (and courageous) minds out there. c'mon ppl!
~ Asheai

[Vitamin-X]

Emperor Hirohito of Japan.
Read by the emperor to his military heads before the begining of WWII.


Methinks all the people of the world are brethren, then. Why are the waves and the wind so unsettled nowadays?

[gratia]

Your eyes
i will never forget those eyes...
a fragile sea of broken blue.
deep and frozen,
sometimes empty.
behind vacancy
there are strange substances...
a tangible begining forgotten.

And all i ever wanted
was to hear you say you care.


Consiquence
Sitting here i waste away, wondering what's real
Have i denied myself access to identity,
locked away freedom for eternity?
countless hours spent wading through agonizing pools
of thought.....life....love.......
what's true?

Closing off Contemplations of Conscience.

I am busy.
do I think before I act?
and what about consiquence......


Alliteration
Crashing confusion continues creating calamity in my mind.
Treacherous termoil twists and turns.
Despair fills dreams of disasterous hope.
Dancing desires destroyed by worthless nothing,
as I paint a pcture of pretentious plight.

[gratia]

so now post some peoms bitches!!!!! do it!

[gratia]

wwwwweeeeeeeelllllllllll..............

[Ragga_Wh0re]

emo:

i am so emo,i say words like dark,pain,sacrifice and turmoil.
i am so emo right now I think i should slash my wrists because my bf broke up with me i am now a worthless slag.
dark,evil,emo,turmoil,decay.
lets kill it and die emo style,in a sea of emo nothingness...yeah nothingness.

*snickers*

[gratia]

^^^ HA HA. you guys all suck :p i joined a peotry forum....so there.

[Asheai]

Originally Posted by gratia

^^^ HA HA. you guys all suck :p i joined a peotry forum....so there.

i'd recommend darkpoetry.com... it's not all that "dark" but it's really big and has lots of supportive ppl.

[ebbomega]

Online poetry
Most often boring or lame.
Fucking Livejournal.