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May 20, 02
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have you ever lost.. someone/somecreature
i can't write worth shit, but it's an ode...not a poem, more like.. thoughts... analogy. i dunno.. so it's not there for like, criticism or compliment or anything it has no specific.. structure... maybe you guys can relate or something. wutever.
i use simple english so.... this isn't a creative piece, that's why it's not in creative corner... the subject is open to discussion.. but the piece below is just there to say what i prolly couldn't say any better than that, thoughts that trail.. yeah.. goodnight. sitting by you, watching as your little body grows weak we are nothing but driftwood, floating by, carried upon the life of the waves, lured by the tides, and the promise of land.. traveling from shore, to shore it is not us, that decideds the time, nor place, but the waves... that tear us from our homes, till we are swallowed by the hungry sea... so far from home. we continue to travel endlessly, as for some the journey is long, and others, short at times the ill-tempered seas are turbulent, and at times, peaceful and tame... (your head locked back, you eyes, partly closed) hold on, you're almost... we reach the end of the journey upon a beach laying on a bed of sand, we are surounded by the fate of others, where we part from the energy of the windy seas. a reminder of a past that seemed not too long ago... isolated upon a shore, we are not alone.. not far from here the echoes of our jorney roll by, upon each passing wave, to carry another drifter's lost soul, safely towards the peaceful shores.. close your eyes and rest..., you are home. Last edited by yoko*; May 20, 02 at 06:11 PM. 
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May 20, 02
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beautiful yoko :)
thank you for taking me on this journey... My interpretation of this is relates to my own personal experiences.. the mood you created brings me back to certain memories/thoughts of mine but gives me a more optimistic look on them... a very thoughtful piece~ ~breezy Last edited by Breezy; May 20, 02 at 09:24 PM.
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May 21, 02
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heh... cuz I never come to this board... but yoko signed my g-book sayin she missed my posting... so I came back to reply a couple of her posts... :p (there's no artsy ppl on ed.. so this is my lil creative outlet)... if u miss me too I'll reply to ur posts as well! :p
~breezy
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May 21, 02
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breezy- "amanda" is pretty artsy...i kinda skimmed through some of her artsy stuff and AMAZING! i prob said this before by...damnnn u're art stuff is amazing when im bored i take a look at u're site to see wuts new. =)
im tryin to get artsy...lol
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May 21, 02
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timmy tim tim! heya~ I haven't really been doin a helluva lot! I'm trying to get this year over with!.. (sooo sick of highschool!)... but other than that, and working on my portfolio, I've jus been chillin in coquilam :).. I wuz gonna go to heat, but then I realised it wuz my grad weekend! and next week I have my old school's grad~! :)
~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bebu!!.. hey! I wanna meet u.... everyone seems to jus love you! :p and I may have been exaggerating... I'm sure there are some artsy people on ed.. but they never (or very rarely) post their art... at least that I've seen~.. and I love looking at other ppl's art to see the different styles n shyte :).. speaking of which, I wanna see your art bebu! :p... and amanda, I've read a lotta her poems, and they're really good.. I have never seen her art tho~ is it posted or does she have a site??? and thaaaanx! I never even know u've seen my site!.. heh, u should sign the g-book :p... I haven't been updating it recently though... I'm working on a new spiffy website, altho my computer skills are lacking!! adios ~breezy
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May 21, 02
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awww..yoko..it makes me think of past experiences with lost things..kinda sad..but kinda for the better..nice...~
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May 21, 02
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breezzzzzzyyyyyyyyyyyy
hoot ;) thx for comin back to reply, nice to see your "name" again. haha... good good you got my lil msg on ur gbook, i almost forgot that I signed it for a bit, i come by ever so often to check out if there's anything new though... lazeee, hehe yeah, but that one isn't related to this one. you know wut i mean.
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