Sep 02, 04
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Tidbits
Don't spoil the craving,
here's a sample my good seer. It may make one go some crazy, well that's just the beauty here. Take a little not too much, sweet imbrace, the faintest touch. Getting by may need a crutch. ... Want it all don't let it go, love it now but here's the show. Much too little in the flow, to disrupt the current's woe. Delicate's this sweet imbrace, like the smile on your face, It's what's needed to give chase. ... Learned a lesson and it's sad, but now I know I am glad, as long as I let out tidbits. 
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Sep 02, 04
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woot woot bro
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Sep 02, 04
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the rhyme scheme is horribly redundant.
its spelled embrace. :) you seem like a smart guy, you can do better than this.
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Sep 04, 04
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^Wow thanks spelling bee, did you ever think that I might like cheesy shit?
Yeah I can do better, but I don't think fnk deserves better. I will share one of my more emotional aggrandized poems for you, I hope you can relate.
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Sep 04, 04
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^i anticipate that poem lady guy.
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